It can use a bit more fantasy, but there are a few things that needs to be in the essay:
– the bachelor Im going to apply for is Computer Science and Technology
Connect the following bullet points with the bachelor
personal characteristics (with examples) as affinity with mathematics (and having a good basis of Maths), perseverance, adaptability and creativity (hobbys: photography, videography, playing the piano)
I like to challenge myself (connect it with for example troubleshooting).
Notice that:
– Ive taken part in a course with introduces computer science which went well and I liked it. Ive been in contact with some algorithms as the Dijkstras algorithm.
– Ive already passed the HSK 6 test in 2019 June. And I passed the HSK 5 test this September with a total score of 273. (Connect it with that I can handle and am suitable for the bachelor which is in Chinese)
– Reason for choosing China is because China had made rapid advances in technology. China is one of the countries with the highest technological expertise. (With some examples) And it gives me the chance to learn about my own culture and roots in an educational environment.
