Here are the three prompts that I need you to write. They total 1150 words but I already have some content for you to work off of. In the pdf I attached you will see that I wrote a rough draft for Prompt #1 and #3. I didn’t write anything for Prompt #2 but I will provide all the directions and what I want you to write about below.
PROMPT #1
Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. You can type directly into the box, or you can paste text from another source. (650 words)
-For this essay basically just use my rough draft and put it into collegiate level writing. I need everything to be at a high level and condensed into 650 words.
-In the FIRST paragraph, I write about my first car wash business and how it sparked my interest in entrepreneurship.
-In the SECOND paragraph, I write about how I was lost in high-school and I needed to figure it out so I decided to attend community college
– In the THIRD paragraph, I write about my real estate investment firm internship that turned into a job and how it gave me invaluable experience in the business world that will help in my efforts of pursuing an education in business
-In the FOURTH paragraph, I want YOU to write about how community college served as a stepping stone for me and how I can offer a unique and mature perspective to the school and how the school will provide me with the right resources to succeed.
PROMPT #2
Describe how you plan to pursue your academic interests and why you want to explore them at USC specifically. Please feel free to address your first- and second-choice major selections. (250 words)
-I need you to write this small essay in a collegiate, condensed manner.
-In the first paragraph write about how the school will immerse me into an environment that emphasizes academics, relationships, career building etc.
-For the second paragraph write about Marshalls first integrated entrepreneurship program that will give me the skills I need to start a successful business
-For the third paragraph write about my plans of joining Marshalls real estate finance association and possibly minoring in USC Price for Real Estate Development to learn more about the industry Ive been working in and collaborate with other students on the same path.
-And of course for the fourth paragraph write about USC networking opportunities and how USC offers unique programs such as the Marshalls Career Advantage Mentor Program (CAP) and how it will get me connections with alumni that will teach me.
-This one is a fairly simple prompt. As long as it sounds very professional and is 250 words we should be good.
PROMPT #3
What is something about yourself that is essential to understanding you? (250 Words)
-This essay is a little tricky. I already have the essay written but I need you to change it to how you see fit. The essay isn’t a WOW essay yet but it is close. I really need your help to tell a story here. The concept here is that I was just a kid who was gifted in piano but wasnt mature enough to understand that it made an impact on people’s lives. Whats essential to understanding me is that I realized that life is about sharing your gifts with the world no matter what you think of yourself because at the end of the day being gifted means you have something to give. I really want you to incorporate this in the essay somehow. And remember this needs to be done in 250 words.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
