Assignment Overview
Instruction:
These short ‘Core Concept Response’ essays are designed to test and develop your abilities: (i) to explain ‘core concepts’ (i.e., a key ideas, arguments, or theories) covered in this subject in your own words, and (ii) to critically evaluate these ‘core concepts’ again in your own words. Your short essay does not need to include a traditional introduction (so e.g., you don’t need to provide a roadmap of the discussion to come), so you can just get straight into the work of explaining the key ideas (and then after that evaluating them). And in relation to the critical evaluation your essay must have a clearly identifiable main claim, and clearly stated reasons given in support of that claim. You do not need to reference lots of academic papers. There should be at least one and no more than three references in total, and these should be references to relevant readings from the library reading list for this subject. And quotes should be used very sparingly as I want to see you unpacking the key ideas and claims in your own words. However, despite those points, it should still be clear to me when I read your essay that you have studied and reflected upon the lecture materials and relevant readings from the library reading list.)
Question: 1. Can animals have thoughts and beliefs?
Assessment Requirements Summary
The Animal Minds: Thoughts and Beliefs assessment is a short Core Concept Response essay designed to evaluate a student’s ability to:
- Explain core concepts – Students must articulate key ideas, arguments, or theories from the subject in their own words.
- Critically evaluate concepts – Students need to present a clear main claim and support it with reasoning.
- Use minimal references – Include 1–3 references from the subject’s library reading list. Quotes should be minimal, with emphasis on personal interpretation and reflection on lecture materials and readings.
- Direct approach – No formal introduction is required; students can begin immediately with explanation and evaluation of the concept.
Key pointers to cover in the assessment:
- Define what constitutes ‘thoughts’ and ‘beliefs’ in animals.
- Discuss scientific evidence supporting or opposing the idea that animals have mental states.
- Present a clear evaluative stance (e.g., do animals possess thoughts and beliefs?).
- Provide at least one supporting reference from the library reading list.
Approach Taken by the Academic Mentor
The Academic Mentor guided the student through a structured step-by-step process:
- Understanding the Question
- Explained that the essay requires both explanation and critical evaluation.
- Highlighted the importance of addressing “thoughts and beliefs” specifically, rather than general animal behavior.
- Research and Concept Clarification
- Assisted the student in identifying key readings from the library list related to animal cognition.
- Explained core concepts like theory of mind, animal cognition experiments, and comparative psychology.
- Structuring the Response
- Advised the student to start with a concise explanation of animal mental states.
- Guided the student to follow up with critical evaluation by forming a clear claim (e.g., “Animals can have beliefs to a limited extent”) and providing reasoning based on studies or theoretical arguments.
- Writing and Integration of References
- Encouraged minimal referencing: 1–3 relevant sources only, used to support key points.
- Reviewed draft to ensure ideas were articulated in the student’s own words and quotes were used sparingly.
- Review and Refinement
- Checked that the essay demonstrated engagement with lecture materials and readings.
- Ensured the argument was logically structured and evaluative rather than purely descriptive.