You may wish to use the space below to provide UBC with more information on your academic history to date and/or your future academic plans. For example: How did you choose your courses in secondary school? Are there life circumstances that have affected your academic decisions to date? What have you done to prepare yourself specifically for your intended area of study at UBC? (maximum 600 characters)
I am working as a Lifeguard applying to kinesiology
Seen lots of active, health conscientious people
How to stay active yet safe
Help people reach optimal performance and recover from injuries
This is how you could start:
Working as a lifeguard, I felt that a sport-related major with health sciences is the perfect …
since this is 600 characters is it possible for you to revise one of my paragraph that I wrote on another prompt? I was writing about how I was too nervous and messed up and tried to get back on the right beat. And when I did it sounded just like how I had practiced. Also, what I had learned from this experience. after all the amount of practice I still messed up etc.
The sleepless nights spent practicing for the flute solo were finally going to pay off: these were thoughts that ran through my mind when I was called up to perform. As the dazzling spotlights on the stage pierced my eyes, my vision got blurred, but I could vividly see the audience. I finally felt the pressure of standing on the stage as a soloist. As the conductor queued me into my solo, I was too absorbed in trying to overcome nervousness. I went in half a beat late which made the sound of the melody with my violinist (bad). Just when I thought I mastered courage, the debacle crushed my ego.
